PREDATOR'S SICKNESS (PRE ALPHA)
A downloadable visual novel for Windows
The pre alpha build for visual novel, Predator's Sickness is now out and you can download it below for a small fee of $1. Being early access, it's at it's cheapest it will be right now.
As it is the pre alpha build the art is thumbnail sketches and the music is stock music but the writing is basically finalized for now or at least in a place where I think it's good for release. Also important, included in the game files is the font Ageng sans, download it so the text doesn't get displaced.
CURRENTLY ONLY WORKS ON WINDOWS, GONNA TRY SEE IF I CAN GET IT WORKING ON MAC AND ANDROID SOMETIME IN THE FUTURE I DUNNO!!!
It's dark gay tragicomedy vore visual novel with some horror elements. Following the exploits of two men - Penn and Veryl, promoter and booker respectively of an underground wrestling promotion. But not today as Penn intends to have a normal evening with his best pal and partner in crime. Things take a turn when Veryl's appetite needs to be satiated.
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You don't need to be familiar with anything related to SKKW my main work this is a spinoff of to enjoy it I don't think. Content warnings are included both in game and in a little txt file in the zip and I highly recommend you read through them. Stay safe! Or you could go in totally blind lmao. Whatever you want.
But general content warnings: Heavy themes, drug abuse, implied graphic violence, and sexual fetish content
So yeah!!!! Give it a read, it's about ~24k words and is about a 2 hour read.
You should also absolutely give me your feedback and tell me what you think :0
And if you have thoughts on it...... you should encourage other people to give it a read through too because advertising my unmarketable art is hard!!!!
IF THERE ARE ANY BUGS THAT NEED FIXING OR FORMATTING ERRORS PLEASE TELL ME!!
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I was expecting this to be a very horny (Possibly really dark) read that I could forget about, but now I feel very conflicted emotionally?
Like, normally you would disconnect from characters depicted in very extreme scenarios, kind of like reading a horror story from the killers perspective. But instead I followed along with them, if that makes sense?
I felt guilty, nervous, and ashamed with them even though I never have even gotten close to doing any of these things. Hell, I've never even been high before, yet I still found myself feeling like I was experiencing it.
By the end of it, I just felt weird cause I liked it? It was written really well for something that was supposed to just be a taboo kink. You made something really great, and now I have a new emotional crisis to deal with. So yeah, I'm pretty conflicted...
Thank you for your wonderful words, I am glad you came away from it with a heavy heart and enjoyed it for what it was! As admittedly, a lot of concepts in it are a little hard to swallow haha.
I have always seen my longer form works such as Predator's Sickness, is that if you go into it expecting a purely dick in your hand experience, I don't think a person would have super pleasant time. The way I see it, the fetish erotica aspects are a vessel for me to convey the emotional themes and narrative that I don't think could be done quite as effectively if it wasn't there. I like it too feel very human, for a lack of a better way to put it, cos at the end of the day, there is a method to the madness. Adding nuance to something that people don't usually think too deeply on is interesting in my opinion. Vore is a fetish that usually comes and is presented without consequence, without feeling for who it affects once the moment is over. Intertwining it with a lot of things such as the cyclical nature of trauma, addiction, and codependency... It speaks to me, and I hope it spoke to you as well,
It does, and I can't wait to see more from you!!
It does, and I can't wait to see more from you!!
Holy SHIT this novel is dark. Still pretty sweet though.
Thank you! I always worry that I oversell just how grim it is (I know fatal vore stuff is common place but I mean even for that the themes I touch upon are very much outside that usual comfort zone) so I'm glad to hear it honestly! Despite that I'm happy it was an enjoyable (?) read nonetheless.